FEEDBACK ON DRAFTED FILM

001:

"Really like the lighting and the music box sounds, the fuzzy, crackling sound is a bit overpowering, but also quite jumpy."

 002:

"Liked the variety of shots/clear and I liked the way the title appeared. Maybe add sound over the chase?"

003:

"Good range of camera angles, music matches the film title."

004:

"Good establishing shot, really cool title effects, amazing tacking shots. Very short but I'm assuming not all there yet."