THE
DOLLMAKER
DOLLMAKER
Megan
Byford
Institution logo
appears, FADE TO BLACK
TITLES BEGIN
(WIND NOISES)
(CAST NAME) (CAST NAME)
(CAST NAME)
FADE OUT:
INT – WOODLAND – KILLER’S
SHED - MIDDAY/EVENING
FADE IN:
Panning shot of the
shed and woodland area.
(WIND NOISES)
CUT TO INT – INSIDE KILLER’S SHED
Pan
around the shed to see a girl desperate trying to get out of her rope restriction.
CUT TO BOTTOM OF AN OLD TABLE:
Panning
upwards shot of killer at an old table, on the table there are hammers and a
knife covered in blood. There is also a book – a photo album.
OVER THE SHOULDER SHOT / POINT OF VIEW:
Watching his gloved
hands flick through the photo album that has previous girls he has killed in it
– pictures of dolled up women.
CUT TO DOOR SLAMMING:
CUT TO THE FIGURE:
Figure turns around,
looks at the door, but never shows any features that would make it visible who
it is.
INT – WOODLAND JUMP CUT:
Pan up of girl in
the woods, showing full dolls outfit and make-up. She is standing looking
around, out of breath. Girl hears noise behind her and starts running. MID SHOT OF GIRL
GIRL - dressed in
dolls outfit, looks innocent and young, also looks scared.
CUT TO FEET RUNNING:
See
her stepping on leaves (CRUNCHING LEAVES
SOUND EFFECT) and hear her breathing deeply (SHORT BREATHS SOUND EFFECT). Another sound effect may be the sound
of her heartbeat, this gives suspense.
SPEAKING BEGINS
GIRL: (hears footsteps behind her, whips head
round, looking scared)
PLEASE! LEAVE ME ALONE! WHAT DO YOU WANT FROM ME?!
PLEASE! LEAVE ME ALONE! WHAT DO YOU WANT FROM ME?!
*no reply*
Girl turns and
starts to run again, starting to cry. She runs (past camera) and in the
background of the trees, we see the hooded figure.
CUT:
Pan upwards of the
figure, holding knife, before we get to the face, he moves in chase of the
girl.
POINT OF VIEW SHOT:
POINT OF VIEW SHOT:
As if in the girl's point of view, running through the woods, also another point of view shot from the killer chasing the girl (seeing the girl from behind running in the same direction)
CUT BACK TO THE GIRL:
Girl has stopped and
is looking around frantically, zoom into her face, the fear present in her
eyes.
Suddenly a black
gloved hand grabs the round the mouth of the girl, (SOFT SCREAMING)
CUT TO BLACK:
TITLES BEGIN AGAIN
THE DOLLMAKER
(MUSIC BOX STYLE MUSIC, REPRESENTS CHILDHOOD
AND DOLLS)
DIRECTED, WRITTEN
& FILMED BY: MEGAN BYFORD
A good start to this script though some details not complete yet. Although you detail some of the types of edits you plan to use there is only one camera angle listed here.
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